Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(q) 5 (Song) Won'T You Baby? ! - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

I was hoping to find you there
But you are gone
My heart is in tatters
Completely torn!

Be for real, wont you baby
Why dont you just talk to me
Lets sail out in our boat
Into the open, in the high sea

Was it just my imagination
Or was it just your cold?
You seemed so far away
What we felt, doesnt hold?

Be for real, wont you baby
Why dont you just talk to me
Lets sail out in our boat
Into the open, in the high sea

I miss the crinkling dimple
I miss the warm spark
You have gone missing
Loneliness hits me stark

Be for real, wont you baby
Wont you just talk to me
Lets sail out in our boat
Into the open, in the high sea


Comments about (q) 5 (Song) Won'T You Baby? ! by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (6/5/2007 1:18:00 PM)

    ....it creates its own tune, indeed... stylish work TO. t x (Report) Reply

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  • (6/3/2007 6:58:00 AM)

    delightful song filled with emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/3/2007 2:37:00 AM)

    This is lyrically beautiful, & quite tune-worthy, indeed, T.O...It's Tone, can be mixed into a Celine Dion type of song, as well as a Pat Benetar, or Green Day song type.
    Do you write music? ....Great Stuff, young lady!

    FjR
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 5, 2011


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