Mind rumpus; thoughts viscous; words pause
Vicious vagueness vituperates
Poesy prowls; never in poise!
Demurs to egress with prowess
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Thats why you are my fav poet sir.....great great poem....you rock sir....goes to my fav....10
our poetry is our survival, , , , a vehicle of catharsis at a minimum....and even more for others....pain shared is diminished
You have certainly given vent to your anger in this poem....I agree with Indira..you need to chill out...
why such vengeance in the poem? ...... beautiful right and meaningfully penned.....be careful......
why such vengeance in the poem? ...... beautiful right and meaningfully penned.....be careful......
When you get up to your elbows in quagmire? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Great combination of so many words beginning with the same consonant. They provide a lot of punch and food for the ears adding extras to their meaning. The s words are especially effective. They also remind me of the previous poem about snakes.