M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Quantum - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Soaked in a blend of mysticism and mayhem
She began to question the course of her life
And for the first time in her solitary life
She saw herself in the identity - mirror
And explored the possibility to fly from the lonely life
Which kept her confined for years
Under dark clouds of love
That was moving nowhere
Other than killing her thought process
Finally, she shed her shells of breathless
To take a fresh leaf from life.

Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational, life, self discovery

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Quantum by M. Asim Nehal

  • Bharati Nayak (11/13/2015 6:56:00 PM)

    Finally, she shed her shells of breathless
    To take a fresh leaf from life- - - - -The quest for meaning and purpose of our life is the first step towards creation.Finding a creative outlet to our deepest emotions liberate our soul.- - - - Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.
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  • (11/13/2015 9:15:00 AM)

    Inspiring, true character of great womens sketched here Asim. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/13/2015 6:33:00 AM)

    This is really a great inspirational poem. Self realization is something that doesn't come in an easier way. However, your poem made it so clear with beautiful poetic expressions.10++ (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2015 3:16:00 AM)

    nothing like a change to make life better
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 1:42:00 AM)

    Mysticism and mayhem both are wonderfully observed in this poem that speaks about quantum love which is expressed in each line. Discovering life through this is fantastic definitely. Nice sharing....10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/21/2015 6:54:00 AM)

    Thanks much Kumarmaniji

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

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