Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Promises - Poem by Loke Kok yee

I had been told a secret which I had promised not to tell
The one who told me the secret had also promised as well
Since you are my best of friend I will tell you what befell
Only if you promise that in your heart it will forever dwell

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Quickie-Promises by Loke Kok yee

  • (11/16/2015 1:36:00 AM)

    Exactly how secrets get out and about. You definitely tell it how it is in your poem. Love it. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 2:27:00 AM)

    Shhhhhh.....Keep it secret even walls have ears..........loved it..10+ (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (10/28/2015 10:23:00 AM)

    Secrets we will not tell
    In our hearts they dwell
    Till our lives end we'll not tell

    Great message of secrets in the garden! Lovely write! Rate 10.
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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/24/2015 9:58:00 AM)

    Haha! Like this secrets are shared secretly worldwide. nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/23/2015 11:07:00 AM)

    Thus the pact is made and both seem quite confident that the other will not divulge the secret to anybody! Quite cute picture! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 8:41:00 AM)

    Since you are my best of friend...Very nice expression shared here. Interesting poem....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 12, 2016

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