Quickie-Promises Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Promises

Rating: 5.0


I had been told a secret which I had promised not to tell
The one who told me the secret had also promised as well
Since you are my best of friend I will tell you what befell
Only if you promise that in your heart it will forever dwell

Quickie-Promises
Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Since you are my best of friend...Very nice expression shared here. Interesting poem....10

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Simone Inez Harriman 16 November 2015

Exactly how secrets get out and about. You definitely tell it how it is in your poem. Love it.

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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015

Shhhhhh.....Keep it secret even walls have ears..........loved it..10+

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Paul Sebastian 28 October 2015

Secrets we will not tell In our hearts they dwell Till our lives end we'll not tell Great message of secrets in the garden! Lovely write! Rate 10.

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Sanjukta Nag 24 October 2015

Haha! Like this secrets are shared secretly worldwide. nice one.

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Valsa George 23 October 2015

Thus the pact is made and both seem quite confident that the other will not divulge the secret to anybody! Quite cute picture!

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