Rain Poem by Rini Shibu

Rain

Rating: 5.0


When darkness surrounds
Your smartness drains out
The expectations go high
And its hard to reach the sky
You light a candle on your palm
Heart aches but you stay calm
Who knows how much it pain
As you wait for the rain

Tuesday, October 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: wait
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 30 October 2018

Waiting can be painful. Expressed perfectly!

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Rajnish Manga 30 July 2019

Who knows how much it pain As you wait for the rain.... //.... Each line unfolds a new meaning. Beauty of expression doubles with brevity. Thanks, Rini.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2019

" Who knows how much it pain" ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 January 2019

You light a candle on your palm Heart aches but you stay calm....pain and rain, , , , , , waiting in anxiety......... many emotions with a deep thought. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2018

Who knows how much it pain As you wait for the rain....so touching with lofty theme. Waiting is painful. Beautifully inscribed. Thanks for sharing.

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Lamar Cole 30 October 2018

This is a great thought invoking poem that is very heartfelt.

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