When darkness surrounds
Your smartness drains out
The expectations go high
And its hard to reach the sky
You light a candle on your palm
Heart aches but you stay calm
Who knows how much it pain
As you wait for the rain
Who knows how much it pain As you wait for the rain.... //.... Each line unfolds a new meaning. Beauty of expression doubles with brevity. Thanks, Rini.
" Who knows how much it pain" ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You light a candle on your palm Heart aches but you stay calm....pain and rain, , , , , , waiting in anxiety......... many emotions with a deep thought. tony
Who knows how much it pain As you wait for the rain....so touching with lofty theme. Waiting is painful. Beautifully inscribed. Thanks for sharing.
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I would like to translate this poem
Waiting can be painful. Expressed perfectly!