Rain Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Rain

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday I was in the parched, red desert, where it pours only seldom,
Bearing joy for varicolored cacti blooms, a silvery shower, very welcome.
This morning I deluged the green, pathless forest, at the dawn of purple.
Tomorrow, wet footsteps will travel, down the tree-lined street of myrtle.
In wild days of ago, my fervor caused floods, as I danced in dewberries;
Then a soft, yellow sun spun rich gold, making cherries and cranberries!
While there is gladness everywhere I go, my sporadic errors humble me,
Like an errant wind which blows off course, tenacious, golden honeybee!

Rain
Wednesday, March 20, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,green,joy,purple,rain,sunshine,travel,tree,weather,wind
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 20 March 2024

Marvelous poem, dear Evelyn, I have enjoyed tremendously.5 Stars! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 March 2024

I offer my heartfelt thanks for the pure joy of reading your comments, my friend. I am delighted that you enjoyed the poem tremendously.

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Kim Barney 27 March 2024

Very colorful and pleasing to read.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 March 2024

A well crafted poem embellished with compelling images. A great read as always!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 March 2024

Very beautiful Thank U for sharing

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 March 2024

Thank you, LeeAnn. I'm so happy that. you enjoyed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 March 2024

Beautifully penned. Thanks for posting. Loved it.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 March 2024

Thank you. Your appreciation is a great pleasure.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 March 2024

Artistic.......a magnificent poem! Loved the last two lines the most. A perfect 100 out of 100

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 March 2024

I am so happy that you enjoyed this poem. I am gratified by.your kind expressions.

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