Kumarmani Mahakul
Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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Rain Of Smiles We See

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We see from far in Western Hill
In lap of ocean the child plays
With new smile in East moon talks
Night comes in and day goes out.

Sun having long journey sets now
Just like a child crawls on ocean
Spreading rays of calmness on moon
Sun says good bye for today to us.

So many smiles, rays form and dance
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Friday, March 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,life,spiritual
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 18 March 2016

A beautiful poem on life. The whole world is smiling n shining. The rain of smiles...what a lovely expression. The poem has a very positive vibe. Yes, it's spiritually enlightening to read the signs of God in Nature.

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Pushpendra Patel 19 October 2020

Rain smiles when there is monsoon and when there is low pressure. Rain is good but heavy rain causes flood situation. Recently Hyderabad city is facing problems due to flood situation. Forecasting says that another two days it is going rain heavily there.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2019

Rain of smiles we see every day dear, You are the super creator you write Beautifully in every face daily rain, Boon we get as special in eternity. What a beautiful imagination with noble views and ideas. thank u dear poet Kumaramani. tony

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Rain gives beautiful smiles. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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R Soos 14 November 2016

the grammar pushes what might be a common thought into new directions - very good! Sun having long journey sets now Just like a child crawls on ocean Spreading rays of calmness on moon Sun says good bye for today to us

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 March 2016

Far in Western Hill! ! To see the ways of nature. Nice work.

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