The heavens relent
Clouds burst with torrential rain
Watering the earth
(for Indira Babbellapati)
yeah, saw it on the tv...life is full of nimiety! thnq for the haiku...
Rains #2 is a flawlessly written senryu which is absolutely beautifully conceived and expressed, Sandra. You have a great talent for these Japanese poetic forms. Carl.
Elegant and eloquent. What more could the doctor order? Great Haiku. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
You have so much skill with this form. I am not usually that into haiku but yours are among the best ever.
Where life continues to grow, under the glow of the lords smile....beautiful work Sandra 10++
'watering the earth' would have made the imagery look more mystic...heaven/earth...but these are only after write suggestions...the original creative thinking to be admired...thanks...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a well scripted haiku.... short n sweet..