Rains Of Peace Poem by koyel mitra
Rains Of Peace
The bright, robust sun
and the dark clouds
are in the thick of fray.
Nobody can guess
who will win the fight.
The brawl reached its climax
with a wreak of vengeance
the nimbus clouds
engulfed the radiant sun.
A streak of lightning
forked across the sky,
heavy rumbling thunder
pouring on the earth
the rains of peace!
In short said a lot, the style of presentation fine, so.......10+
Wow! This is one is really a good one. The persona here is like almost celebrating the triumph of its desire. A 10 for this one.
quite a moving craft the poet in u is soaked in the beauty of words caryyin the thought along
a very deep imaginary write....i like it and hoping for that rain of peace pour sooner on this earth....i give it 10+ thanks
I love the picture it brought to mind because the poem played a short story inside. Great Poem.
Koyel, Please forgive my lack of professional courtesy in not commenting on your poems sooner. I too enjoyed RAINS OF PEACE. I liked the idea of putting both the Sun and Clouds into the same ring, and letting them go at it! This time the clouds won! I'll be watching for the re-match! your friend Mike
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 4:08:40 PM # 1.0.0
A real good one. I gave a 10. Ron