koyel mitra

Spring

When Nature dresses itself in perfect beauty then it's Spring,
Here people's hearts hear a new ring;
Under the canopy of trees with dark leaves,
A sigh of relief a lover heaves;
This yields a lover's heart's sand-dunes,
Cuckoos sing sweetly in multi-tunes;
Timorous lambs skip with joy,
It's definitely a time to enjoy;
Nature expresses its raptures,
Our hearts it definitely captures!

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 22, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 25, 2008

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  • Ahmad ShiddiqiAhmad Shiddiqi (12/23/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    Lovely! keep writing! Dear, friend.
    Would you like to read and comment on my newest poem, Lost Forest's Ancient Chant, Terrace of Violence, Hymn To Star, Hymn To Sun, Cascades of Caprices, Fountain of Fearless Fiance, Children Song, Valley of Heart, Mata Hari, Song To Society, Visibly, etc.please? Thank you very much.

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  • Rakhi Jayashankar (10/1/2008 1:27:00 AM)

    kool poem
    a 10 for the poem and a 10 for the rhyme

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  • Edgar Andrade BaguioEdgar Andrade Baguio (9/27/2008 7:45:00 AM)

    Well, nice rhymes....cool spring descriptions....

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  • Joseph Poewhit (9/26/2008 9:52:00 AM)

    A very pretty poem filled with emotions

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  • Paolo Giuseppe MazzarelloPaolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (9/26/2008 9:23:00 AM)

    And now waiting for springtime I can read this delicate 'Spring', written with bucolic inspiration in Virgil style.

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  • David Desantis (9/26/2008 7:52:00 AM)

    very beautiful and refreshing poem koyel...i haven't been on here in a while, but its really cool to see some great talent...i like the allusion to nature dressing itself

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  • Reetessh Sabrr (9/26/2008 3:11:00 AM)

    words cease beauty rules!

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (9/25/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    The spring of joy conveyed in the best possible way! !

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  • Seema Chowdhury (9/25/2008 1:41:00 AM)

    well done. excllent expression.

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/24/2008 4:39:00 PM)

    Reading it I felt the spring, lovely composition.10++

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (9/24/2008 10:41:00 AM)

    so beautiful....very good 10

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  • Anjali Sinha (9/24/2008 9:22:00 AM)

    scenic beauty in spring
    displayed nicely as if on
    canvas.
    full 10+
    love anju

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  • Deepti Agarwal (9/24/2008 12:22:00 AM)

    yr work has definately captured r heart.. :)

    with good rhyming sceme...n lovely picture... :)

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  • Shannon D Smith (9/23/2008 10:32:00 AM)

    I that was a great poem! ! +10

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (9/23/2008 6:07:00 AM)

    while I see the spring is next, My mind start- oh spring! oh dear come!

    fine expression koyel! ++++10

    khub chamatkar bhashar bunon hoyechhe!

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  • premji premjipremji premji (9/23/2008 6:02:00 AM)

    i wish your life is
    spring always...

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  • Lynda Robson (9/23/2008 4:43:00 AM)

    Spring is a lovely time of year and I think you have captured that in your poem, well written,
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (9/23/2008 1:31:00 AM)

    a poem on the sweet feels that spring up along with the thought of spring...good piece...good idea behind the write...10

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  • Tom BalchTom Balch (9/23/2008 1:12:00 AM)

    Spring the loveliest of seasons,10 regards Tom

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  • _____________________________________ - (9/23/2008 1:09:00 AM)

    even in the unevenness of autmn nature shines through... but spring...

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