Random Thought Xxvlll (Clashes) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thought Xxvlll (Clashes)

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Like tiny stars in Galaxy
We live in our circles
Imbued with our
Attractions and repulsion
From their place stars
Scan the universe
So do we with news
And information.

Occasionally two mighty galaxies clash
The sky lit up the earth trembles
Undetected many new stars are born
Before the universe goes on to be quiet.

Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sadly we humans even with our limited power clash more often and step on boundaries of others.

This little poem was inspired by my poet friend Bri's comment on a word ' few'. What is interesting and amusing to me is how an inspiration takes its own shape and aim away from its original thought if we let it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2015

Yes stars live in galaxy and we live here with nice hopes and attitudes. This is very fantastic reflective poem shared definitely. Interesting....10

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2015

Occasionally two mighty galaxies clash The sky lit up the earth trembles Undetected many new stars are born Before the universe goes on to be quiet..............this is an entertaining, but for me also a mysterious stanza. perhaps because i'm not sure what the symbolism is about in the first stanza. are the circles circles of friends, neighbors, peers? do two circles clashing mean like in West Side Story (the movie) when the 'white' and the Puerto Rican communities/gangs and their families clashed? ? and are we talking about real babies (stars) being born due to the clash. i guess i'm puzzled. hah! but i'm glad i could have stimulated you so much! bri :)

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