Reborn Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Reborn

Rating: 5.0


A soul reborn
Rises
Through the ashes

To the sound
of the crow
To put right
What once
went wrong

Justice will be done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 21 October 2011

Truly one of my favourites, I reread this one a couple of times. Amazing depth, and an interesting look into 'rebirth, ' beautiful work, you never disappoint me.

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Sonali Sings 21 October 2011

Each rebirth bringing with it a renewed zest, vigor to fight back the wrong....poet not hoping but assured of his victory each time. Do or die kind of spirit. Deep hidden meaning!

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Vipins Puthooran 20 October 2011

Excelllent poem, , a lot of things are in this poems to remember, , it'll bring us a new life when we rise from an ash... Well written!

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Shadow Girl 20 October 2011

Rising out of the ashes...exactly like a phoenix..but i still question if justice ever really existed....sad but true. Great poetry..short but meaningful.

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Jacqui Broad 20 October 2011

Magic. Like a phoenix? I also believe in justice, though I like to call it karma.

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Pari Dharawat 08 November 2011

Small Poem Packs the Punch...Reborn to Prevail Justice. I liked it. Such is the beauty of poem, where small poems have profound meaning. Nice Keep Writing

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Zane Lewis 05 November 2011

Thank you. Your poem really goes to heart. Never stop writing you are brilliant.

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(De Va) 27 October 2011

Your words have inspired me to write: Phoenix.....based on Reborn by Dave Walker The Phoenix has risen as my soul was born into this world. I see the souls of others as I see the universe whorl, I can look into your heart, and feel your inner child. The Phoenix has risen, he is never to be defiled. We each have had a Phoenix rise into the sky. We traverse the universe as our souls learn to fly.

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Marvin Brato 24 October 2011

Profound write, like it!

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Eric Cockrell 21 October 2011

again and again, we choose to return... love this one a lot!

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