Recued From Darkness Poem by Luz Hanaii

Recued From Darkness

Rating: 5.0


Clear is the way that we must go,
Don't look behind!
All that you've known soon will be gone.

Now you must feed your soul with light,
No more despair, no broken dreams,
Your time has come to see the light.

Pick-up your sword and follow me!
A ray of light has made it through,
Your broken soul has payed the prize.

The light has come, no more despair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 27 February 2011

This is a fine poem, sometimes you have to pick up your sword and walk away from despair. I enjoyed this totally.10++

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 28 February 2011

touch of class Luz.you've shown a positive attitude towards life, for people who think its very difficult to come out of darkness.well penned luz

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 March 2019

The light has come, no more despair. Powerful ending line. IMAGINE: The LIGHT has come, no more despair. This poem gives everyone who reads this so much glee and happiness. Thank you for sharing, Luz. A 10+++++++ for the Vote. I just do what others have also done. It may be for the ratings or the voting, I do not know exactly..

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Luz Hanaii 12 April 2019

Thanks Silvia, I do the same. I guess that's how they do it? thanks for the 10.

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Riza Braholli 09 February 2019

there is so much joy and light this poetry... to fill with hope... congrats by dr. riza

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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

Thank you for your encouraging words, they mean a lot to me.

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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

I appreciate your words of encouragement and thank you much.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2018

Now you must feed your soul with light, No more despair, no broken dreams, Your time has come to see the light.-.......follow the light, the light has come, there is no reason to be in despair. a very positive poem with definite determination....... tha nk u dear poet. tony

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Cody Williamson 08 November 2011

Oh so uplifting and hopeful! :) Great piece Luz!

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Allemagne Roßmann 26 August 2011

Every cloud has a silver lining..well said..

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