Release Me Poem by Vanessa Kingsley

Truely amazing! ! ! ! ! ! don't let people tell you who you are! ! thats amazing! ! ! !

Don't cage my hands toss me in the sea, release these chains, where I can be, a woman with an unconfined mind, , , this is the last warning this time.....go girl

This is a solid writing but it isn't special in any way. I tried hard to find a phrase or sentence that stood out, and I couldn't find one. I would describe this as plain. The meaning is crystal clear and the substance of the message could be quite profound in ways. But the piece ends rather quietly and the last rhyme was not very good. If a poem ever needed a special ending it was this one. Overall, I would say only fair. GW62

A little rebellion never hurt anyone. Nicely done.

This is a very insightive poem. I love how you amde it ryhme :) ! ! ! lol its excellent like always :) !

a profound piece..a struggle for reestablishing one's identity...great way to go

Good write good work But I will like you to make your poems flow more 10