Repairing Car We Have Returned Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Repairing Car We Have Returned

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Something faulty we noticed
And then we went to garage,
For restoring different parts,
Car was brought in to lane.

Condition was made good soon,
After repairing this was coloured,
Touching up was so nicely done,
We were happy both father and son.

This was just like a man going,
To hospital for check up again,
Doctor treated and he came back,
Our car was ready for long drive.

Now after repairing this is nice,
We have returned back to home,
From town to village in long drive
After few days we shall go far.

Friday, July 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: car,driving,lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2017

Father and son! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Isabel Pimentel 05 November 2020

Whenever car needs repair, we should repair it. This poem is very interestingly penned.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2020

Usage of this word as adjective signifies, Rambling jasmine is fragrant very much, Usage of this word in noun is interesting, Activity of walking is pleasurable in shore. lifestyle and thinking. very good poem. tony

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Pushpendra Patel 03 March 2019

Vehicle should be in good condition. After re[paring car you have come. This is nicely expressed.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 November 2018

whatever at last back to HOME ///Thanks GOD

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2018

Taking a car to a workshop for repairing is just like attending a serious patient in hospital! A beautiful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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