Rephrased Poem by Savita Tyagi

Rephrased

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Concept of sin and virtue
Creation of our own mind.

Hence solutions are too of our kind
Our society, our surrounding, in our time.

Transient are some laws made by us
More lasting are other for mankind.

All Nature is " the structured vision of cosmic Self
Alive with the touch of being's eternity.""

None can see the heaven
Who has not passed through hell.

Our ego, the fluid personality
Wrapped around our inner self
Hides from our view it's eternity
Like foam obscures the clarity of waves.

Wednesday, September 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reflections
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is simply a rephrasing of some reading material. The language was difficult but the essence had deep impact.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2020

Virtues! ! Reflections. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

Concept of sin and virtue Creation of our own mind. Hence solutions are too of our kind Our society, our surrounding, in our time.........so touching and true. Beautiful poem. Nice theme. Well penned. Thanks. 10.

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