! Requiem For A Sweet Door Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Requiem For A Sweet Door

Rating: 2.5


A sweet D oor
glorified a closure on lies
double edged dagger door
with efforts so high like
a space mission
chased a WORD and declared
one great sweet closure
educate mind before
misinterpreting
D oor close for a while and
open again for one more victim
laugh on it again
plan(z) well for one more
time and drink
tears in gallons
Sweet closed door of lies
a rose and candle from me
and a requiem I sing
for you on your sweet closed door......


(Dedicated to a Sweet Door)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 07 September 2008

Solid metaphoric imaginings Rema, the closure comes at a recognised cost but titillating new openings beckon... Rgds, Ivan

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Ramesh T A 05 September 2008

A rose and candle a fine requiem for closed door!

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Emancipation Planz 04 September 2008

Way to go Rema... aroha xx

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