Saturday, March 7, 2009

Rescue Me (C) 3-7-09 Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this world every kiss begins with Kay and every heart ends with ache
I guess I ignored the sign and that’s where I made the big mistake
Terrible things has happened in my life these long and harmful days
It’s sad because I never realize at anytime I can die in so many ways
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D H 06 April 2010

Awesome I have to take notes, just kidding this is your writing, Awesome! Nice poem, reminds to peice myself back together now and then.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2010

A nice piece of work. Keep on writing that we may also learn from you. Thank you. E.K.L.

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Anonymous Heart 28 February 2010

What an amazing poem. I really liked your writing style.

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Ryan Richards 21 February 2010

Neat text, good writing and styles. I enjoy it 100 percent.. Awesome

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the poem was awesome... my favorite lines are the last four, which is what im feeling most of the time.... thanks for sharing... +++10

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