Responding.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Responding....

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Responding to Sandra´s Poem Of The Day,
I wrote this piece, please read. Thank you.


All things physical
are temporary,

but all things mental,
emotional,
sensual,
verbal,
ethical,

all in our mind
never die,
they are lasting,

they are in our thoughts all the time,
they could be loveliest,
saddest,
such as
the beauty of compassion,
love,
tender passion,
sensation,
they never die,
they are glued in our minds.

As IF they are glued in our minds,
they cling to our inner spirit,
they stay,
absolutely,
especially when it is a Beautiful Mystery,
it never goes away,
this is my response to your Why,
in your P.O.T.D. of Today....


©Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Tuesday the 4th of December 2018-
@ 9.30 hrs. A.M. West-European Time

Tuesday, December 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: opinion,poem,response
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As IF they are glued in our minds,
they cling to our inner spirit,
they stay,
absolutely,
especially when it is a Beautiful Mystery,
it never goes away,
this is my response to your Why,
in your P.O.T.D. of Today....


©Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Tuesday the 4th of December 2018-
@ 9.30 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2018

Material things are perishable. Mental things are sensual. But eternal things are things of God in power and values. We need values to inherit. All values never die. We have to accept for values and God's grace. An excellent poem is very well penned...10

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Sandra Feldman 07 December 2018

Hum, very, very nice Absolutely and beautifully compatible with what I wrote and even better explained and compounded.! Very excellently done, a most delightful experience. Than you so much, dear Sylvia.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2018

Tender Passion! ! With the muse of the inner spirit! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 December 2018

Gratification Physical! Oh! yes its material. and all material is things of decaying. But The Love in true sense- manipulates physical enjoyment in passionate veins and with no surplus greed in passion love gets its sublimity ....//// great response

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2018

Great response, Mahtab. Thank you.

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