Farbe Bar

Rhythm Unleashed 5 - Poem by Farbe Bar




Your eyes gets me hypnotize
You seem to be very nice
But who's gonna break the ice?


I'm a failure but for you I'll improvise
And will try to get the best out of my tries.

With you I want to share some beautiful trice
And I hate all those guys
With whom you have those spark flys.


If with you I had ties
I could've defined paradise.

Your every move gets me mesmorize
For me truth is your lies
You're my snakes and ladders' dice
For you I'm ready to do any sacrifice.

Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme

Comments about Rhythm Unleashed 5 by Farbe Bar

  • Chinedu Dike (12/19/2015 1:50:00 PM)

    A good depiction of vain exultation of beauty - a loss of self in mere glamour devoid of substance. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Farbe. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 7:55:00 AM)

    Well Farbre, this one is cool! Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/21/2015 7:44:00 AM)

    Thank you for inviting me to read your poems. You have composed the verse beautifully. Keep writing keeping the unity of thought. Wish you all the best. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/20/2015 3:48:00 PM)

    This seems to be very nice and beautiful. Amazing drafting shared in this page. Interesting...10 (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/19/2015 8:46:00 PM)

    Extremely good write.. actually awesome for a 18 year old.. your poem has the rhythm, set some good grroooovvvy tune for these lines.. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (11/19/2015 3:02:00 PM)

    If with you I had ties
    I could've defined paradise...sounds quite romantic its for sure paradise but dont make it paradoxical lolz good write
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  • Musawir Raakh (11/19/2015 2:15:00 PM)

    Good work dear, liked the rhyme work, quite romantic (Report) Reply

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/19/2015 1:27:00 PM)

    …For me truth is your lies
    You’re my snakes and ladders' dice
    For you I’m ready to do any sacrifice
    Confession of a passionate lover... nice work
    Thanks for sharing! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 19, 2015

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