Farbe Bar


Rhythm Unleashed 5 - Poem by Farbe Bar

BEAUTIFUL LADY





[CLEAN VERSION]


[1]

Your eyes gets me hypnotize
You seem to be very nice
But who's gonna break the ice?


[2]

I'm a failure but for you I'll improvise
And will try to get the best out of my tries.


[3]
With you I want to share some beautiful trice
And I hate all those guys
With whom you have those spark flys.


[4]

If with you I had ties
I could've defined paradise.


[5]
Your every move gets me mesmorize
For me truth is your lies
You're my snakes and ladders' dice
For you I'm ready to do any sacrifice.

Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme


Comments about Rhythm Unleashed 5 by Farbe Bar

  • Chinedu Dike (12/19/2015 1:50:00 PM)


    A good depiction of vain exultation of beauty - a loss of self in mere glamour devoid of substance. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Farbe. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 7:55:00 AM)


    Well Farbre, this one is cool! Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/21/2015 7:44:00 AM)


    Thank you for inviting me to read your poems. You have composed the verse beautifully. Keep writing keeping the unity of thought. Wish you all the best. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/20/2015 3:48:00 PM)


    This seems to be very nice and beautiful. Amazing drafting shared in this page. Interesting...10 (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/19/2015 8:46:00 PM)


    Extremely good write.. actually awesome for a 18 year old.. your poem has the rhythm, set some good grroooovvvy tune for these lines.. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (11/19/2015 3:02:00 PM)


    If with you I had ties
    I could've defined paradise...sounds quite romantic its for sure paradise but dont make it paradoxical lolz good write
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  • Musawir Raakh (11/19/2015 2:15:00 PM)


    Good work dear, liked the rhyme work, quite romantic (Report) Reply

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/19/2015 1:27:00 PM)


    …For me truth is your lies
    You’re my snakes and ladders' dice
    For you I’m ready to do any sacrifice
    Confession of a passionate lover... nice work
    Thanks for sharing! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 19, 2015



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