Ride The Chariot Poem by C. P. Sharma

a brilliantly written poem to command those horses of Anger, avarice, pride, etc. anjali

that's a well written and lovely piece, evocative and so suggestive, O really loved the flow of your words and ideas, so brilliant, this is what I call poetry, and you are my friend a real poem

Yes, deep and profound but there is room to fine tune which I think is needed in a poem of this class. H

i go with dr hitesh opinion...a nice expressive poem..naizz

Very deep and profound, CP! You have a unique writing style. Best Wishes, Marilyn

very meaningful the thoughts are so great...very interesting.. flowing with depth... 10+++

makes me want to ride the chariot. this is a wonderful poem.

A deep poem that makes my mysterious body wander in the secret profundities of my soul.10.

a wonderful approach... wish we cud ride this chariot n harness all the horses well... tomake r life worthwhile..

DEAR MR SHARMA, Thanks for a poem with philosophical attitude with perfect rhyming brilliantly worded, Ilike the last two lines more since it is conveying the main message. 'Ride over the chariot, command the horses Dive deep within to strengthen noble forces' Should it not be the motto of our life right from the beginning.? A small suggestion to ponder over the end rhymes with the same words in 1st& 3rd(body) and 2nd& 4th(soul) which will make it sound better. A-10- from me for this poem.thanks for sharing.--Rajkumar