Rings Of Fire Poem by Rob Lamberton

Rings Of Fire

Rating: 5.0

We climb the mountain
Beauty, wind, rain, sun and fire
Volcano erupts
Molten hot temperature
Together our feelings rise

Feel the pleasant fire
As our elements combine
Climb higher with me
Till all our dreams drift like steam
And all that is left is Real

Friday, April 5, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: volcano,elements,fire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 April 2024

A vivid and wonderful depiction of a strong and deep love. A love that goes for reality is a great love. Amazing write.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 April 2024

Bravo Rob Just love it TFS

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Sandra Feldman 05 April 2024

A real hot poem, fiery but poetically beautiful and very intense. Fabulous work!

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