Dreams are fading
And the heart is sailing
Nowhere it will reach
Like a stone it will sink
Leaving the ripples behind
Until it vanishes from your sight
You portray in a very wonderful poetic style connecting to imagery in metaphor creatively. Great in brevity wow! ! Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "
Hi Rini, Good to see you back on PH. You have come back with a very nice poem. With fading dreams, life loses its sense of direction. No wonder, heart, sailing in free wind, would reach nowhere, but may sink. So it is important to reinvent the dreams and set sails with a purpose. You have expressed the melancholy feelings with profound clarity. But melancholy poems are so unlike of you. So collect yourself and march forward. Nothing can stop you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like a stone it will sink Leaving the ripples behind Until it vanishes from your sight.....extremely well expressed!