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One is truth
Any shade else
Lies in me

Past survives
Anyhow, present
Dies in me

Folks should learn
How they die

Rise in me
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Monday, January 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
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Mj Lemon 16 March 2020

This made me think back to growing up...When we are young, we ask our parents 'why, why, why...' When we grow up, we often ask the same questions...but they are aimed back at us. A great verse, Ali.

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Unwritten Soul 28 January 2020

Question in minds asking why and why...but words in mouth answer is somehow, somehow... I personally think that i should be credited for this beautiful work, because we never discussed about this...and rhymes? i dont really write rhymes these days...i just write simple. So please notice that your beautiful thoughts are purely yours and you are talented. Take it

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Bharati Nayak 27 January 2020

One is truth Any shade else Lies in me - - - - - - - - - Out I smile Holding my all Whys in me - - - - - A very thought provoking poem.Perhaps we know what thought crosses our mind.We have many 'whys' inside us, but it is not easy to express before others.Sometimes it is wise to keep quiet.

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