Godfrey Morris

Gold Star - 5,964 Points (August 1,1982 / Kingston, Jamaica)

Road To Heaven - Poem by Godfrey Morris

The road to heaven is laden with a trail of tears

A patchy path of peaks and troughs pattered by dust

Straightly bounded road but blinded by the mist

Devoured within the seas of illusions

So the road of heaven is hardly troded on

A lonely road, boring road absent of pride

Accesible by all; refused by many

No money needed to pay

No degrees sought to stay

The road to heaven is a free high way

Just a will to endure

a heart so richly pure


Comments about Road To Heaven by Godfrey Morris

  • (9/22/2012 8:37:00 AM)


    great piece.
    you have real talent.
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  • Margaret Haig (9/21/2012 11:50:00 PM)


    Great use of words try to add how to get to heaven by belief in Christ and salvation are the steps. (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2012 2:17:00 PM)


    this is what many hope for, but it's unfortunate that few could pass the way (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (8/31/2012 1:27:00 PM)


    In awe of the love you share in this poem for your own beliefs. Beautifully constructed with rich phrases! I like! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/26/2012 8:38:00 AM)


    A road we should all be traveling - wonderful write. (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2012 3:04:00 PM)


    awesome writing. so much can be said. will to endure.
    :)
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 25, 2012


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