Romeo And Juliet Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Romeo And Juliet

Rating: 5.0


Carry me
to the center
of your buffering
heart
Let me be
the rhythm
of the beat
dag..dug...dag...dug
When the rhythm
stops
we die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martine Kolber 29 May 2008

Yes, that's it, that must be love, what a warm and carring poem. I love how you share feelings in just a few lines! Take care, Martine

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

Let me be the rhythm of the beat Rachel Ann Butler

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Carl Harris 06 November 2008

Though brief, this is clearly one of your very best poems, Sulaiman. It is a very effective use of terse words and makes a single, simple yet universal statement. There are less than twenty words in this poem, a rarity for you, yet these few words provoke an encyclopedia of thoughts in all who read this fine poem. Carl.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 August 2008

Small but beautiful is the coz I add 10.

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Rani Turton 30 May 2008

Concisely and very effectively put!

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Lynda Robson 29 May 2008

Short but packed full of love, nicely written by you, Lynda xx

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