Root Of Problems Poem by V P Mahur

Root Of Problems

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So many problems in the world
Arise, for we interfere
Into others' sphere
And leaving our own concern
And our own affair
We try to tackle with
Matters of
Any other person

Leaving our house burning
We are bothered
How to ignite a feel cunning
To put a spark
To the premises of others
To make it pitch dark

Without caring
Our own boat's sinking
We keep on thinking
How to make a hole
Into other boats' bottoms
To make it sinking

Saturday, July 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: manners
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on July 19,2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A powerful perspective on human nature and the need to take care of one's own business and not causing confusion for others. A warning that people and places of power will do well to heed!

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This is the very nature of human being...........to think ills of others when himself immersed in deep ocean of problems....................very nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

A fantastic poem. Very true said, Root of All Problems is we don't see our own houses burning but like to burn others houses, our ship sinking but laugh at others. Instead of seeing our own problem we are much concerned about others and unable to save our own ship.....This is life and you have portrayed it very well using different examples. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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