Rose Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Rose

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Many are the gardens,
so many are the flowers,
with color and fragrance.
I was looking for a rose!

Soft and pink,
dancing with the blow,
the naught of winds,
neat and clean,
by a shower of dew.
Partly covered,
in the fresh green leaves.
A bud!

All over the night,
she slept in moonlight,
a sleep so deep,
that when the winds,
removed the leaves,
and saw her beauty,
open and exposed,
the wind was wet.

And the drops of rains,
mild and pleasant,
personified the wind,
in a handsome youth.
And the youth,
when tried to kiss,
the virgin bud,
clouds roared like a lion.

And the lightning,
fell on the conductor,
proudly standing,
on the top of a church.
And the charge of lightning,
entered the earth.
The earth tremmbled,
and tremors,
vibrated the earth.
The youth was frightened.
Vaporized once again,
in merely a wind.

Moon removed the curtains,
dense and thick,
dark brown in color.
When the moon light touched,
the sleeping bud,
she smiled like a goddess,
she opened her eyes,
twisted her petals,
partly open,
for a kiss of someone!

I saw that bud,
in an isolated corner,
shying and hiding,
the outcome of nature,
waiting for someone,
having a writ for the bud,
I walked with love,
and gentle desires,
didn't touched the leaves,
didn't touched the petals,
bowed my head,
and kissed the bud.
The bud exposed,
all her petals.
A beautiful flower,
the bud was now.
A rose indeed!

Sunday, October 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Rose is the queen of flowers.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 05 October 2014

A Eid gift to my sweet heart wife. Happy Eid Mubarak.

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Valsa George 06 October 2014

So you were looking for the prettiest rose to be gifted with love to your sweet heart on Eid! I am sure she might be mighty pleased to see her Romeo approaching her with a lovely rose! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 October 2014

A beautiful poem or a rose both are lovely gifts.

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2014

Beautiful poem that makes a lovely gift to your lovely wife. She must be very pleased. Wish you both a very happy Eid.

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Salini Nair 07 October 2014

I saw that bud, In an isolated corner, Shying and hiding, The outcome of nature, ...........................beautiful poem on rose

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Khalid Saifullah 20 November 2017

Simply beautiful, what a gift! ........................................................................

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Paul Sebastian 14 October 2014

The rose bud must have blushed and shied away when it was kissed! What an engrossing poem! ! I loved it. You have painted a beautiful picture of youth. Great write!

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

All over the night, That slept in moonlight, A sleep so deep, That when the winds, Removed the leaves, And saw her beauty, Open and exposed, The wind was wet. A soothing poem. Enjoyed the read.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Belated Greetings! ! ....Happy Eid. This is one of the beautiful gift to be presented to your beloved wife. Fantastic flow of words, which make this Rose Lovely and Special one!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Belated Greetings! ....Happy Eid. This is one of the beautiful gift to be presented to your beloved wife. Fantastic flow of words, which make this Rose Lovely!

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