Rose Bush's Life Poem by Mrs. Cynosure

Rose Bush's Life

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have you ever seen a rose bush
grow over a period of time
well it gets bigger and
a lot more complected,
as it grows and expands

it starts as a seed
and with the right care and time
it develops into a bush
but with the wrong amount the bush is not heathy
and may die

that’s the same with a baby
we start as a egg in our mothers tummy
with the right amount of care and 9mounts
we sprout into the world
young, healthy and a able body baby
but if we are not taken care of properly then
we may not live

a rose bush sprouts many different roses
during it’s life time
as if they are sections of there life
generations
of there life time

our lives look and act
like a rose bush
also it starts with one seed
you
then we sprout up and
make our own lives
with a family and
that spouts other things off of us
husband, wife, kids, and grand kids

our lives are like a
rose bushes life
for a rose bushes
are our lives

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caleb Mckinney 01 November 2008

full of symbolism :) nice :)

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

very observant...meaningful write, Becca...good philosophy of life in soft sweet simple lines...10

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Sierra Love 23 December 2008

Very Descriptive. I really enjoyed reading it. =]

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Rani Turton 18 December 2008

You're right, the care a rose bush needs describes our lives, and the happy moments are like it's wonderful fragrance...

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Amy Ludidi 23 November 2008

stages of life nicely descibed. must improve language use nana, otherwise sweet :)

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Saint Cynosure 03 November 2008

So true this is Becca, very good work...

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