Crazy Nights* Poem by Mrs. Cynosure

Crazy Nights*

Rating: 4.9


You just don't relies how greatly I do care
Or maybe you do
I want to tell you things I shouldn't feel or that's what they say
I can bight my tongue
And hold back

The things we both feel
I want to tell you there is someone out there that really does care
I will just tell you that you are the man that makes me
A lost of words
‘Cause I know words will never be enough to give to you
You are the person that I look forward to each day,
The one that makes my day smile again even though my tears
Just to hear your voice makes my worries melt away
Your not just a man in first or second your the man.
The man of my waves and my fire

Will you be the one man to finally tame the restless storm?
Shall I kiss all my crazy immature nights’ goodbye?
Do I have to grow up drastically again?
Will I live and breathe within your eyes?
Like all my hope has desired
My heart flutters and may belong to you but only time will tell

How do I hang something up
When it's all that I know
As I see my crazy nights’ turn gray and disappearing in
The shadows of the last foot steps I take
The person I am stepping towards pulls too hard at times
Makes the brave turn weak
But maybe that’s what I need
Only time will tell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tokyo hotel 16 November 2008

I'm sorry but are we reading the poem this is not very good.. I'm sure you'll get better as you grow up

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 19 November 2008

Hold on...time will give u the most amazing gift...

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premji premji 22 November 2008

interesting..beautifully penned 10+

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Chris Harris 23 November 2008

This is a wonderfully written poem! very heart clenching!

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Viola Grey 23 November 2008

'The man of my waves and my fire '.... that is a fantastic line there...nice work...good piece

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 24 April 2018

Wonderful words. Who will not love to hear these words.

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C. P. Sharma 29 April 2009

Passionate, sincere, expressive and don't know what! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just loved it. CP

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Lucero Flores 28 March 2009

I really like that one i got it a 10 out of 10

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Brittiany Jones 17 December 2008

good job i realy like this it is pretty

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

lovely penned....feelings poured in...thanks for sharing....sebastine...

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Mrs. Cynosure

Junction City Oregon
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