Rose Petals Poem by Xelam Kan™

Rose Petals

Rating: 4.7


The darkness is drifting slowly away
and made her alarmed in sleep
and dismay.
Dreams that made her charms
more radiant,
But now melted it as mist at day.

It's a miserable poignancy
That reflects a lover`s tendency
And can only be rejoiced
If it blessed as a beloved choice.

Ah! How hypnotic was that scene
That amused my heart serene,
When her dazzling smile
Caused a dimple sweet for a while.

Let my heart be bloomed
in your love,
With those bosom peaks and rosy cheeks;
to hold them close
As petals of rose.

Saturday, December 22, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Fatimzahra 22 December 2012

very sensitively, nice and lovely

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Bright Morn 22 December 2012

Beautifuoooootiful, made me speechless

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Jahan Zeb 22 December 2012

Beautiful description Gulsher. comparison of cheeks with petals..... Superb. I loved the end.... Again a beautiful comparison and both the lines go nicely with each other. To hold them close As petals of rose Beautiful. I liked you started the poem in a slow flow and the flow caught pace as the passion and emotion raised. Beaitiful

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Payal Parande 22 December 2012

beautiful.....i am lost for words this is the most romantic poem sir..amazing

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Unwritten Soul 22 December 2012

Sweet smell rose to your nose, it really teach you a thing, be something that nice and adorable, may you like a rose, or smell like a rose..thorn less however...a sweet write and really enjoyable one Gulsher_Soul

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Ciarli Ling 03 February 2013

Great John, you have talent, I must admit.

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2013

very beautiful poem, , , , loved it, , ,

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Vivek Tiwari 04 January 2013

How tender and smooth a expression As seems to spread the fragrance to seren the heart like Rose Petals. Love it greatly.

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Kavya . 03 January 2013

v nice..simple soothing poem as soft as touch of a rose petal

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Shivani Misra 03 January 2013

Beautiful one and i love the title :) keep Sharing.

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