The darkness is drifting slowly away
and made her alarmed in sleep
and dismay.
Dreams that made her charms
more radiant,
But now melted it as mist at day.
It's a miserable poignancy
That reflects a lover`s tendency
And can only be rejoiced
If it blessed as a beloved choice.
Ah! How hypnotic was that scene
That amused my heart serene,
When her dazzling smile
Caused a dimple sweet for a while.
Let my heart be bloomed
in your love,
With those bosom peaks and rosy cheeks;
to hold them close
As petals of rose.
Beautiful description Gulsher. comparison of cheeks with petals..... Superb. I loved the end.... Again a beautiful comparison and both the lines go nicely with each other. To hold them close As petals of rose Beautiful. I liked you started the poem in a slow flow and the flow caught pace as the passion and emotion raised. Beaitiful
beautiful.....i am lost for words this is the most romantic poem sir..amazing
Sweet smell rose to your nose, it really teach you a thing, be something that nice and adorable, may you like a rose, or smell like a rose..thorn less however...a sweet write and really enjoyable one Gulsher_Soul
How tender and smooth a expression As seems to spread the fragrance to seren the heart like Rose Petals. Love it greatly.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very sensitively, nice and lovely