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Pain is beautiful.
A perfect union of fire and peace is love.
A drop of venom in the veins
Ripping apart every piece of a glazed paper stained red
Making the body ache
and the alkaline water oozes from the eyes,
dancing in the agony,
Endowed with the delight of fierce love.
Oh, how it fastens the body with barbed wire
Making the skin, bathe in blood

Unbearable is Love.
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Saturday, June 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,agony,broken,broken heart,death,depression,feelings,fire,hurt,loneliness
Unnikrishnan E S 03 June 2018

Hi Asavri, An admirable poem on love and pain of separation, loneliness. The opening line, : : pain is beautiful: : inimitably simple but expressive... Every line, nay, every word, arouses the agony, douses the smile. Love, : : How it fastens the body with barbed wire, : : : : making the soul bathe in blood: : (I made the change deliberately) ... I join the chorus: : Unbearable is love: : My hear is just heavy, with your pain... A drop venom..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 June 2018

Asavri, such a well expressed poem??????

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2018

A perfect union of fire and peace is love Endowed with the delight of fierce love Tasting the pure nectar. love is all we need, in the absence of love, we simply vegetate. thank u for this poem which makes the reader think a lot. tony

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Throw yourself ten for going Indian again. What about Russian?

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