Rubaiyat - Address Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Address

Rating: 5.0


When he asked me my address,
I showed him my final resting place
He dared not to ask for an invitation
In deep thoughts he left me alone.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 02 October 2017

Excellent poem. This reflects the hypocrisy of people who are so scared of the realities of life or for that matter- death. Thanks a lot, Mohd. Asim ji.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 September 2017

Death could be beautiful your words proved it. very thought provoking

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 September 2017

Woah this is witty and intense. Seems to be realistic about death in a great poetic way. Great in brevity. Thumbs up. Superb rubaiyat, . Pls do leave your thoughts comment about my latest prose too, titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'

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Nosheen Irfan 07 September 2017

So profound. Death is inevitable n a bitter truth that every human has to face. How well you capture the fear this word holds for us. A big 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

Oh! it is a brilliant philosophical poem on death with immense deepness. Dear Asim, you have so wisely and nicely presented this poem here, hence u are thanked.

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