When he asked me my address,
I showed him my final resting place
He dared not to ask for an invitation
In deep thoughts he left me alone.
Death could be beautiful your words proved it. very thought provoking
Woah this is witty and intense. Seems to be realistic about death in a great poetic way. Great in brevity. Thumbs up. Superb rubaiyat, . Pls do leave your thoughts comment about my latest prose too, titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'
So profound. Death is inevitable n a bitter truth that every human has to face. How well you capture the fear this word holds for us. A big 10.
Oh! it is a brilliant philosophical poem on death with immense deepness. Dear Asim, you have so wisely and nicely presented this poem here, hence u are thanked.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem. This reflects the hypocrisy of people who are so scared of the realities of life or for that matter- death. Thanks a lot, Mohd. Asim ji.