M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Don't Misuse Eyes - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

They say, from birth till death, size of our eyes remains same
But our focus, vision and mission to use or misuse differs
With age we play with our eyes, abuse and misuse
Without realizing once they are gone the darkness will dwell.

Topic(s) of this poem: eyes, life, rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rubaiyat - Don't Misuse Eyes by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (10/30/2015 3:50:00 AM)


    Eyes are windows through which we see the world! Sight is one of the greatest gifts we have got, the greatness of which we will realize only when we are deprived of it! So eyes should be used for seeing good things! Great message! (Report) Reply

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  • (10/28/2015 11:46:00 PM)


    Eyes are door to heart and mind.......10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/28/2015 11:00:00 AM)


    Let us see the right things in life and, seek for peace always! Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/28/2015 9:53:00 AM)


    As I said earlier the view of your looking life is wisely amazing. Great concept. (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (10/28/2015 8:25:00 AM)


    The colours of life is absorbed and reflected by eyes. Well worded with a good message.Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2015 2:07:00 AM)


    thanks for reminding me to have my cataract removed.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015



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