M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,528 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Soul And Body - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

For years my soul dwelled in an unknown body
praising and appreciating her splendor,
and this turned out to be a fisher’s net
where, heart was disintegrated from body.

Topic(s) of this poem: soul, body, rubaiyat

Form: Quatrain

Comments about Rubaiyat - Soul And Body by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/2/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    Heart remains disintegrated when we do wrong things, Loved your writing.Asim.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/2/2015 11:20:00 AM)

    Marvellous one. Thanks for sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2015 6:34:00 AM)

    break through the net and again you'll be free
    thanks Asim for this lovely rubaiyat-10
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  • Ari Alsio (11/2/2015 6:21:00 AM)

    heart broken,
    the body is booming,
    joining together
    and the melt to be healthy
    again into one,
    thanks to a strong soul
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

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