Rubble Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Rubble

Rating: 5.0


A little boy and a little girl,
lay quivering at the bottom of
the world. Where at the top of
the rubble lay, there in decay.
The promises of the president,
the world was going to be okay.

Monday, October 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fears,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 01 October 2018

Let's hope that's the reality with Trump!

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2018

Thank you, Richard, For your kind response! .. Your poetry holds such a deep love of God, and life, with ever such heart, meanings, and spirit, that shine so beautifully bright! ..Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2018

The rubble lays and decays with amazing promises. War gives fear. We need no war. All of us need peace across the world. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a beautifully heartfelt reply! .. You hold a beauty within you so deep, like the stars and night sky that shine and speak! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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