Translated by Yiyan HAN(c)
2017-11-19
Been quiet
Been quiet at last
As if ever no tumult
No wind can be heard
Nor the murmuring of leaves
As if ever no voice
Too much kindness disappeared
Too many lives vanished
Ever short of devils in the globe?
Brightness is lost
The Moon cried her eyes blind
In a gigantic fire the Sun died
Only water
Can escape from the scene
All the way to the Pacific Ocean
Brightness is lost The Moon cried her eyes blind/In a gigantic fire the Sun died- Absolutely a fascinating poem gracefully embellished with Knick-knacks! Loved your expression dear sir! Congratulations
I replied to your kind comment on my poem but PH is not working right and my replies are not being posted- -I love responding to comments so hopefully PH will straighten this out. Thank you.
Thank you, Susan, particularly for your patience :) and I know. PH sometimes doesn't function properly.
I am finding your poetry to be thought filled, poetic, strong and novel. Excellent. 10
A great write about peace. A very thought provoking poem.
Thank you very much for your comments, and, yes, this world has too much hatred.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hauntingly beautiful with inspired lines that soar with such beauty of spirit and the will to find peace!
Thank you very much, Hazel.