S.H.I.R.T Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

S.H.I.R.T

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Save your time in righteous deeds
Honourable life you lead always
Introspect and go ahead
Right to freedom you enjoy carefully
Time is valuable don't miss ever.

Tuesday, April 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 25 April 2017

'Right to freedom you enjoy carefully.... in righteous deeds'. One should continue to introspect and review his or her actions to tread on the right path. Thanks for sharing it, Kumarmani ji.

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Gautam Chopra 29 October 2020

We have to live always honourable life. This poem is very nice and interesting.

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Michael Walker 11 February 2020

A carefully arranged acrostic indeed.

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Pushpendra Patel 02 March 2019

We should be careful with time and do righteous deeds. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2017

Right to freedom you enjoy carefully Time is valuable don't miss ever. Great message.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 April 2017

Introspect! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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