Sadness As Rainbow.... Poem by Naila Rais

Sadness As Rainbow....

Rating: 2.8


VIBGYOR by its name,
Every nook sings its fame,
Its tears are our game,
Sadness is all through same,

V-iolent, I-rritating and G-rief pains,
Y-elling o-r sometimes rare r-elief rains,
As if one could feel the others pain,
Why would taunt and betray rain?

The life free of cries,
The thing that everyone tries,
There lies a lot of fear,
Even scared to drop a tear,

The rainbow comes after rain,
As happiness comes after each pain,
The smile comes after the tears,
The life hears after the fears,

Miles so far tears apart,
Success comes after the start,
Then failure starts to fail,
And happiness comes to hail.....

Tuesday, April 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hopeless,pain,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 21 April 2018

Very nicely done. 'Miles so far tears apart, Success comes after the start, Then failure starts to fail, And happiness comes to hail..... '..is very nice.

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Naila Rais 21 April 2018

Thanks for reading it... Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 July 2020

The rainbow comes after rain, As happiness comes after each pain, The smile comes after the tears, The life hears after the fears, Wonderful examples and comparisons. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 March 2019

VIBGYOR. the colours of the rainbow which fascinates all the poets and children of this world. a very fine poem my dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 01 January 2019

very nice poem! Dark hour is part of life but optimism is much important as the poem shows,

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 November 2018

V-iolent, I-rritating and G-rief pains, Y-elling o-r sometimes rare r-elief rains, As if one could feel the others pain..giving new interpretatiions to Vibgyor. very nice poem as usual. thank u. tony

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Thanks sir..................................... Naila

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Hannah Williams 22 April 2018

This is beautiful, I felt it deeply.

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Naila Rais 22 April 2018

Thanx for your appreciation.. Naila

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