Rhythm Is My Passion! Poem by Naila Rais

Rhythm Is My Passion!

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I have a paper in my head
A pen in my heart
And words in my soul
Embedded with love and warmth

But wrapped in shattered heap....

I have a rhythm in my mind
A tune in my veins
And lyric in my mouth
Embedded with fun and chorus

But wrapped in shattered heap....

I have craziness in my nerve
A view in my eyes
And a image in my cerebrum
Embedded with colors and designs

But wrapped in shattered heap....

Rhythm Is My Passion!
Monday, September 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,girl,girly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 September 2018

Naila, such a well penned poem......................10++++++++++++++

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Naila Rais 26 September 2018

Thank you sir! Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 April 2019

there will be more rhythm in one's passion if one composes poems which RHYME Silent poetry can't be heard here i came across a silent poet who does not comment but says his this and that is published who will believe him is he living in a FOOLS PARADISE only tell me NR

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Hans Vr 17 February 2019

Let it break out, Naila. Beautiful poem. I love the passion. The seed of flower is so filled with the need to express beauty that it easily breaks through the cement of a parking lot to spout and bloom, standing lonely but straight shining its own magnificence.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 October 2018

I have a rhythm in my mind A tune in my veins And lyric in my mouth Embedded with fun and chorus.. you are a real poetess dear Naila . you are writing such poems at your very young age....... go on writing please. do not stop. you will become a great poetess.. tony

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Naila Rais 02 October 2018

Thanx for reading......... You always inspire with your encouraging words! Naila

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 October 2018

A lovely poem, indeed, nicely penned.

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Naila Rais 01 October 2018

Thanks sir ! , ! Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 September 2018

your poetry is exquisitely good i have read the latest of you thank you and posted one a warning for teens i have the darker side of the world seen 10 points for urs also NR

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Naila Rais 26 September 2018

Thanx.......... ..... Naila

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