Goodbye sailor man
Our short lived friendship ended
When you jumped ship
Brilliant senyru Sandra....it says so so much between those short lines.....10 from Fay
And all nice girls love a sailor. My first love was studying to be an officer in the Navy and it was the uniform that did it for me! Clever work Sandra. 10 Karin Anderson
truth and sarcasm both there...expressive senryu...thanks...10
well i had no idea, one can narrate a moving, beautiful story through three lines.. this is an exceptional write indeed! ! ! nice love shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a small story told in three lines...lovely