Sailor Man (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Sailor Man (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


Goodbye sailor man
Our short lived friendship ended
When you jumped ship

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a small story told in three lines...lovely

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Priyanka Bhowmick 04 July 2009

story in a senryu... fine write.

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Rakesh Bedi 05 July 2009

A nice written senryu, sandra!

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Fay Slimm 05 July 2009

Brilliant senyru Sandra....it says so so much between those short lines.....10 from Fay

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And all nice girls love a sailor. My first love was studying to be an officer in the Navy and it was the uniform that did it for me! Clever work Sandra. 10 Karin Anderson

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premji premji 17 July 2009

sandra, this is marvellous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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Vaibhav Pandey 16 July 2009

an excellent senryu sandra ma'm.....very witty...10

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Smiley Hooker 15 July 2009

Short, simple but very remarkable piece. very well done! : -)

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Kesav Easwaran 13 July 2009

truth and sarcasm both there...expressive senryu...thanks...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 July 2009

well i had no idea, one can narrate a moving, beautiful story through three lines.. this is an exceptional write indeed! ! ! nice love shan

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