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@saturday Night (02-2009) (/)

Rating: 5.0

Saturday Night


Another bottle of beer that fancy forlorn evening
To chill out the spirit after the arduous lonely week
While smoke fume the air; to wrap his broken wing
Of the face painted blue and gray. Insidious trick;
Sweet words to capture the prey -the chiseled manly,
The incense of youth, to his malicious appetite
Hi and hello -conventional and casual, to be friendly:

cast his spell, let fly the charm, be consumed tonight;
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Eyan Desir 16 September 2009

Sounds nice Boys meet girls and have fun....Men 10s for the write

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Chitra - 16 September 2009

a mature write for a mature subject...well expressed!

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Francisco R. Albano 15 September 2009

expressive. revise to correct grammatical errors.

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Ency Bearis 15 September 2009

a substantial write to the theme and so mature in the sense..great poetic structure...

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

Great figurative language used here...well rhymed...your sensitivity to this theme grows in you........10+++++

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