Satyawati -22 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Satyawati -22

Rating: 5.0


22. An Invitation That Never Came

The invitation never came.

Our spies in Kaashi reported
That the emperor remarked
He had no daughters to be given
To the son of a fisherwoman.

It's a fact that I am a fisherwoman
I felt nothing. No need to react.
But Devabrata was furious
On the humiliation of Hastinapura.

The fury palpable on his face
Like a smoldering volcano
Frightened me. On the day of
Swayamvara, he simply vanished.

He returned a few hours later
As if right from a battlefield
In his chariot were the three princesses
Frightened like deer before a tiger.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

The emperor of Kashi didn't agree to give marriage his daughter to the son of Satyawati. He remarked her son as fisherman. This event has been nicely portrayed here along with the Swayamvara. Thank u dear ES.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2018

Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2018

Ever so powerfully written and deeply moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 September 2018

Hi Becca, Thank you for the time and the appreciation. Obliged

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Susan Williams 21 April 2018

uh-oh.... he may have been angry at the slur about his mother but I think he just made things really sticky... uh-oh.....can't wait to read next installment of this story

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 April 2018

I have just tried to portray the character of Debabrata, by narrating his reaction to this unusual situation.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 December 2017

In his chariot were the three princesses Frightened like deer before a tiger. I loved these lines.

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 April 2018

Hi Geeta, What I have tried to narrate here is the valor and prowess of Bhishma. Kashi had a mighty army. He sheared the army into shreds while taking the princesses away. Single handed lay. You can imagine the awe of the girls.

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Rini Shibu 30 November 2017

Furious devabatra kidnapped 3 princesses as emperor of hastinapura refused to give his daughters to the sons of a fisher woman.. Interesting story

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 November 2017

Bhisma took them away for giving them in marriage to his brother. Though kidnapping princesses for marrying was accepted in those days, it was acceptible only when the abductor himself marries them. Here Bhisma is already sworn to celibacy. The intrigue continues.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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