Saying Goodbye Temporarily Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Saying Goodbye Temporarily

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From the one you have chosen among so many,
despite the strong bond of friendship bestowed,
the profound token of loyalty, you said goodbye...
hopefully temporary...
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Where art thou,
my princess, to which queendom thou go?
to Quantum or shall it be The Milky Way?
for thou saith goodbye unto me temporarily...
well, sure it was you, and not some other mistressee...

The milliards milky ways come towards me appealing
so small that I see them as one curtain of sea links
oh I wished you here, this goodbye is so appalling
hence you cherished me with two, methinks

Where art thou my precious princess?
you told me you go to the south and I'll do my best
waitin' for you, your beauty and cute queendom
don't want your wealth, just you and your wisdom

So please no WhatsApp, but Skype or an InterCall
I sure won't tell your other lovers at all
I'll use the Nightscape train
and I'll not scream even in mental pain

Where art thou,
my princess, to which queendom thou go, honey?
to Cinderella's or shall it be Snowhite
for thou saith goodbye unto me temporarily.....
well, sure it means short and not too long, right?

Please, don't say goodbye when I'm not ready yet
it makes me insane, terrible deadly mad
my mind can't cooperate with all these suds
my sense stays aridly uncomfortable while it floods



©Sylvia Frances Chan
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Wednesday noon@ 12.11 hrs. p.m.
16th Jan- 2013

Saying Goodbye Temporarily
Wednesday, October 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts,goodbye,love and art,love and dreams,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From the one you have chosen among so many,
despite the strong bond of friendship bestowed,
the profound token of loyalty, you said goodbye...
hopefully temporary...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

While it floods! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 13 August 2015

The milky way says goodbye with quantum in mind with wonderful whispering. Really very interesting and fine poem shared with amazing thought and idea. Saying good bye is temporary because there is hope of coming back again. Very amazing......10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 November 2017

Thank you so much, Mrs. Bhargabi. I am impressed by your cute response and feedback. I will appreciate these loveliest compliments from you. God´s Blessings In Abundance. Thank you for the 10-

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