Sitting on sea shore
So cool and calm wind blowing
Unknowing of whats happening around.
Very far away somewhere in horizon
I could see the pretty golden coloured
Sun looking like a bride glowing all over.
Blushing with a orangish glow
entering the grooms chamber
after pausing each steps.
It seems that sea is eagerly for brides arrival.
Slowly and slowly darkness creeping in
Cool breeze blowing
All of a sudden
The two hands from some where it came
Suddenly covered my eyes
With a sudden blow I got up
It was my friends who played the mischief
They went for swimming leaving me on shore.
I forgot myself that I am on seashore.
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.
Geetha Jayakumar.
I like your rhythm, so unusual and melancholic! ! ! ! And always a surprise at the end. Very beautiful Poetess! ! !
this is the live example of God's real scenery being so creatively imitated by the art of poetry with a feel in it! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You have so creatively captured the scenery of the seashore and sky with golden sun. Here I quote..... Sitting on sea shore So cool and calm wind blowing Unknowing of whats happening around. Very far away somewhere in horizon I could see the pretty golden coloured Sun looking like a bride glowing all over. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10