Scenery Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Scenery

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Sitting on sea shore
So cool and calm wind blowing
Unknowing of whats happening around.
Very far away somewhere in horizon
I could see the pretty golden coloured
Sun looking like a bride glowing all over.
Blushing with a orangish glow
entering the grooms chamber
after pausing each steps.
It seems that sea is eagerly for brides arrival.
Slowly and slowly darkness creeping in
Cool breeze blowing
All of a sudden
The two hands from some where it came
Suddenly covered my eyes
With a sudden blow I got up
It was my friends who played the mischief
They went for swimming leaving me on shore.
I forgot myself that I am on seashore.


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Geetha Jayakumar.

Thursday, September 19, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

You have so creatively captured the scenery of the seashore and sky with golden sun. Here I quote..... Sitting on sea shore So cool and calm wind blowing Unknowing of whats happening around. Very far away somewhere in horizon I could see the pretty golden coloured Sun looking like a bride glowing all over. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Poetheart Morgan 22 September 2013

I like your rhythm, so unusual and melancholic! ! ! ! And always a surprise at the end. Very beautiful Poetess! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 19 September 2013

this is the live example of God's real scenery being so creatively imitated by the art of poetry with a feel in it! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 September 2013

Glory to be the God nice scenery

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