Monday, April 27, 2009

Searching Deep Comments

Rating: 4.9

she put motion in my heart
and poetry in my soul
and through her love,
life began to unfold.
...
Read full text

louis rams
COMMENTS
Christine Kerr 29 April 2009

You can learn so much, when you reach down into some pretty deep thoughts. well thought out 10++

0 0 Reply
Linda Winchell 28 April 2009

To love someone so deep that you can feel poetry well up inside of your soul, now that's deep! Loved it, God Bless, Linda (TEN!)

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 28 April 2009

lovable one she must be who put this sweet poem in your soul...continue searching deep, Louis...10

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 28 April 2009

Lovely to have found someone who puts poetry in your soul.10 for you and ten for her. Warm regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Kranthi Pothineni 27 April 2009

I liked the poem a lot...specially the forth verse. Nicely penned.

0 0 Reply

a lovely song like poem.....an experience everybody yearns for

0 0 Reply

beautiful bro.. i love it..

0 0 Reply
louis rams

louis rams

new york city
Close
Error Success