louis rams

Gold Star - 6,448 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Searching Deep - Poem by louis rams

she put motion in my heart
and poetry in my soul
and through her love,
life began to unfold.

she showed me the
beauty that can lie ahead.
if you only clear your head.

clear your head to things that can be
if you set your heart and soul free.
so i searched deep into myself
for all that was locked up inside.
feelings and emotions that i wanted to hide.

what i found was a surprise in me
a love as deep as the ocean
and as wide as the sky.
enough to spread to everyones eyes.

and now with your eyes wide open
i know now that this is your time.
so open up yourself the same as me
and let all your emotions fly free.

this will only happen when you're searching deep
and in the process your soul you reach.

Comments about Searching Deep by louis rams

  • (4/29/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    You can learn so much, when you reach down into some pretty deep thoughts. well thought out 10++ (Report) Reply

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  • Linda Winchell (4/28/2009 9:46:00 AM)

    To love someone so deep that you can feel poetry well up inside of your soul, now that's deep! Loved it, God Bless, Linda (TEN!) (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2009 7:48:00 AM)

    lovable one she must be who put this sweet poem in your soul...continue searching deep, Louis...10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    Lovely to have found someone who puts poetry in your soul.10 for you and ten for her.

    Warm regards,

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  • (4/27/2009 11:58:00 PM)

    I liked the poem a lot...specially the forth verse. Nicely penned. (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2009 10:44:00 PM)

    a lovely song like poem.....an experience everybody yearns for (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    beautiful bro.. i love it.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 27, 2009

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