Searching Deep Poem by louis rams

Searching Deep

Rating: 4.9


she put motion in my heart
and poetry in my soul
and through her love,
life began to unfold.

she showed me the
beauty that can lie ahead.
if you only clear your head.

clear your head to things that can be
if you set your heart and soul free.
so i searched deep into myself
for all that was locked up inside.
feelings and emotions that i wanted to hide.

what i found was a surprise in me
a love as deep as the ocean
and as wide as the sky.
enough to spread to everyones eyes.

and now with your eyes wide open
i know now that this is your time.
so open up yourself the same as me
and let all your emotions fly free.

this will only happen when you're searching deep
and in the process your soul you reach.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

beautiful bro.. i love it..

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a lovely song like poem.....an experience everybody yearns for

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Christine Kerr 29 April 2009

You can learn so much, when you reach down into some pretty deep thoughts. well thought out 10++

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Linda Winchell 28 April 2009

To love someone so deep that you can feel poetry well up inside of your soul, now that's deep! Loved it, God Bless, Linda (TEN!)

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Kesav Easwaran 28 April 2009

lovable one she must be who put this sweet poem in your soul...continue searching deep, Louis...10

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Sandra Fowler 28 April 2009

Lovely to have found someone who puts poetry in your soul.10 for you and ten for her. Warm regards, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 27 April 2009

I liked the poem a lot...specially the forth verse. Nicely penned.

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