Thursday, June 20, 2013

Seasons Of Love

Rating: 4.9
Our love came in the gentle Spring,
So sweet and fresh and true -
When we were young and unafraid,
And all was clear and new.

It blossomed in the Summertime,
And came to fullest bloom -
We lay beneath the Cedar Tree,
Our love there to consume.

But in the chill of Autumn mist,
It then began to wane -
No longer did we feel the joy,
Nor would we e’er again.

So as the Winter gripped our hearts,
Our hands then slipped apart -
We said goodbye and turned away,
As love did then depart.
Valerie Dohren
Diane Hine 25 July 2013
Love's insubstantiality in a neatly constructed poem. A real pleasure to read (as always) .
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Rupesh R.k Babu 22 July 2013
you are truly gifted, we expect many wonders from you
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Piyush Dey 21 July 2013
How beautifully expressed! It touched my heart.... A profound write!
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Hans Vr 29 June 2013
happens to so many relationships. good write, Val
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Hazel Durham 29 June 2013
So sad, like the seasons change so can love change! Superb write!
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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013
such a beautiful write using the seasons as a backdrop. I like very much.
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Passionate Reader 25 June 2013
Simply beautiful. It's written with a great flow. lovely! ! !
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..... W@king Up..... 25 June 2013
Love can leave things behind, but sometimes we leave behind love under that cedar tree. A sad story... But so transfixing while read. Nice work. -W
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Valsa George 25 June 2013
A natural withering away in winter after a sprouting in spring, a blooming in summer and a ripening in autumn! Enjoyed these seasons of love!
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Danny Draper 25 June 2013
The seasons of love and its turning. A nice romantic if not sad write.
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