Secrets Poem by Shouvik Roy
Secrets
There are things I haven't told you yet,
Have I told you?
That with you, the crowded streets
Seem alleys of fallen leaves;
My feet brush against those fallen
And my arms brush against those falling;
Slowly, slowly,
Ochre leaves, sunny leaves;
No clamor, no noise;
Only the songs of birds
And cracks of fallen leaves;
With you by my side,
Your hand in mine,
I walk, carefree
Have I ever told you?
That with you beside
My agony days would smile
And shy away,
As the warmth of your breath
Melts my dire past,
And it runs down my cheeks,
Slowly, slowly;
Haunted past, twisted past;
No joy, no glee;
Only the din of doubts
And murky shrieks,
But with you lying beside
And your head on my heart,
I fall and rise, carefree
So peaceful picture of reciprocity! No question of doubt, debate.Nice Shouvik. .
Ok this poem is one of my favs of yours, I can really feel the emotion in this piece. You are an awesome writer for your age. I love it! ! ! :)
Brilliant still. It's a unique way to say a common thing. Keep it up.
This is so beautifully well-written, and it really draws the reader in. Nice job, I gave it a 10!
Breath taking! I loved it, you really put detail into this and had the reader see it, I applaud you Keep writing! Cheers :)
Absolutely gorgeous... i liked how when you mentioned the leaves are fallen, i visioned that you and your lady felt risen... beautiful...tyvm
green resonates to grow by warmth darkness melts by the rise of sun heart meanders to see path of light yet quest of knowing n beautiful write m thanks for sharin
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2024 4:21:28 AM # 1.0.0
Shouvik, I am speechless, all I can feel and see is heaven door opening in a midst of everyday emotions only the depth of love is felt so deep it becomes that heaven and in this poem I see it swimming in the ocean of love where everything does not matter, everything just disappears. What I love about your writing is the depth and how it takes us on a journey. Beautiful! ! ! ! Love and Light.
Thanks, Kasia, . This means a lot :)