Friday, June 29, 2012


Rating: 5.0
There are things I haven't told you yet,
Have I told you?
That with you, the crowded streets
Seem alleys of fallen leaves;
My feet brush against those fallen
And my arms brush against those falling;
Slowly, slowly,
Ochre leaves, sunny leaves;
No clamor, no noise;
Only the songs of birds
And cracks of fallen leaves;
With you by my side,
Your hand in mine,
I walk, carefree

Have I ever told you?
That with you beside
My agony days would smile
And shy away,
As the warmth of your breath
Melts my dire past,
And it runs down my cheeks,
Slowly, slowly;
Haunted past, twisted past;
No joy, no glee;
Only the din of doubts
And murky shrieks,
But with you lying beside
And your head on my heart,
I fall and rise, carefree
Shouvik Roy
Joyce Rugg 01 July 2012
This is so beautifully well-written, and it really draws the reader in. Nice job, I gave it a 10!
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Samantha Rak 01 July 2012
Breath taking! I loved it, you really put detail into this and had the reader see it, I applaud you Keep writing! Cheers :)
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Zaarah Jasmin 30 June 2012
well written! ! ! a 10 for you! !
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Karen Sinclair 30 June 2012
Absolutely gorgeous... i liked how when you mentioned the leaves are fallen, i visioned that you and your lady felt risen... beautiful...tyvm
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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 June 2012
green resonates to grow by warmth darkness melts by the rise of sun heart meanders to see path of light yet quest of knowing n beautiful write m thanks for sharin
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Neela Nath Das 29 June 2012
So peaceful picture of reciprocity! No question of doubt, debate.Nice Shouvik. .
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Kasia Fedyk 29 June 2012
Shouvik, I am speechless, all I can feel and see is heaven door opening in a midst of everyday emotions only the depth of love is felt so deep it becomes that heaven and in this poem I see it swimming in the ocean of love where everything does not matter, everything just disappears. What I love about your writing is the depth and how it takes us on a journey. Beautiful! ! ! ! Love and Light.
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Shouvik Roy 16 February 2017
Thanks, Kasia, . This means a lot :)
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Darkangel Flyfree 29 June 2012
Ok this poem is one of my favs of yours, I can really feel the emotion in this piece. You are an awesome writer for your age. I love it! ! ! :)
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Natasha Hochar 29 June 2012
Brilliant and beautiful.
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Tiana Webb 29 June 2012
Wow such a beautiful poem, so full of emotion and feeling. I can clearly feel the love of the character. An amazing poem :) Tiana xx
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