Wednesday, June 27, 2012


Rating: 4.3
As I lie on my bed outstretched,
Gazing at the covered up sky;
Some voices strange I hear in my head,
Sizzling, rumbling, laughing by
My ears left and right; but
A qualm would arise, is this in my head?
Or just something outside, unsure I
Lie, hearing the voices' desire,
To stop me, to kill me, of not letting me fly;
But still I lie on my bed outstretched,
Waiting for the voices to die;
Stubborn, deadly, cunning voices;
They want me to fall, with my dreams
Down the sky so wide,
That leads to the golden world
Of laughter and light,
So I lie on my bed outstretched,
Looking at the grey tube-light,
I get off my bed with a whirling dread
But walk with a wry
And turn on the light,
The voices would die,
I bid them goodbye.
Shouvik Roy
Zaarah Jasmin 08 July 2012
great poem! ! ! voices in silence :)
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Daniel David 29 June 2012
A poem which draws you in, like the voices themselves, to a train of thought...... it is like a dream.
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Ritika Abrol 28 June 2012
Attracted me instantly :) ... Love the feel of the poem :)
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Captain Cur 27 June 2012
Well written and composed, I liked the buildup and positive ending to a dark poem.
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Kasia Fedyk 27 June 2012
It is a very real and deep poem, we all experience the voices from time to time, the light is always there whenever we need it and want it. Beautiful Shouvik as always! ! Love and Light
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Darkangel Flyfree 27 June 2012
This one seems dark and powerful with the voices that won't stop, but as soon as you turn on the light there gone. I like it, Great poem! ! !
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Neela Nath Das 27 June 2012
Really nicely cooked.Thanks for sharing.
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Unwritten Soul 27 June 2012
A pinch of each different flavors can spice a poem so least it works on you...nicely taste and u are good chef here...fresh words on the table! LOL_Unwritten Soul
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Kaia Grønnbæck 27 June 2012
Dark and intense. I really like it! ! ! : -)
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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 27 June 2012
We get whatever we wish to struggle for. Good poem, well-penned.
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